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Rewrite the following sentences by SHOWING instead of telling. 1. The dogs ran through the yard. 2. The girl was happy to see her friend. 3. Sam made a touchdown.

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1. The dog came out of nowhere, into the yard and gone in a flash.

2. A smile lit up on the girl's face as she saw her friend walking towards her.


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