Question

Hey, I'm not that good at writing and i was wondering if someone could edit my thesis statement. My prompt is what makes a hero. And down below this is what I have. It can only be one sentence but semi colons can be used . Please help me make it the best it can be. A hero is someone that has been able to make the most substantual impact on a persons life; a hero is someone who is strong through all times, not someone who would give up at the first sight of difficulty.

Answer 1

Hmmm so first GET GRAMMARLY Ik i sound like those \ peps but just get it so u don't have to waste point ur welcome

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Answer 2

First off that’s really good!!! When u day “all times,” you could do “all times, and not” using a complex sentence. And maybe but sign not sight. But honestly this is really good!!!! :)