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Read the paragraph.

For vim and vigor, drink VitaSip! This amazing new sports drink will make you feel energetic, clear-headed, and ready to face the world. VitaSip is full of vitamins and minerals for optimum health. And, VitaSip tastes good. So sip your way to better health. Drink VitaSip—It’s sip-ly delicious!

Which revision would make the advertisement more persuasive?




using extraneous information



citing expert opinion



inserting a run-on sentence



introducing an additional slogan

User Bambam
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It most definitely won't be a or c, because that's bad this to put in an advertisement. D would be ok, but it wouldn't be the best answer because they already have a slogan. I would choose b, citing an expert opinion, to make the advertisement more persuasive.

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