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Which one of my two poems do you like better?

lately it feels like the world is ending.
in a way stranger than the "normal" that's perceived.
but we get to live here, where there are opportunities.
Ask yourself this, and tell me if you agree.
In a world that is deceived, are people meant to be happy?
but it's all about YOUR perspective on things
So for now...
I choose to escape reality and hopefully end up somewhere I'm happy to be.

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The moment you realize you’re not paying attention
is the moment you've escaped reality
it is an achievement we all want and need
because nature is there when no one else will be
So feel the soft grass and hear the trains go by,
the birds will stop chirping and fog corrodes the sky
and we will all wonder
what else we could've done to survive

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ooo i like both but i think i like the first one better i like the idea of escaping reality
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Answer:

I like the first one

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