Question

Check Your Understanding

Imagine that you are editing a classmate's writing and you notice this sentence:
Intelligence, strength, and good looks, qualities that Harrison Bergeron possesses, is just what the government is trying to control.

In your own words, write an explanation so that your classmate understands how to correct the sentence.

Answer 1

Answer: Intelligence, strength, and good looks are all qualities that Harrison Bergeron possesses, which is just what the government is trying to control

Explanation: The last section, "is just what the government is trying to control", doesn't need the word "just" in the sentence. I also changed it a little bit because I feel that it is more proficient that way.