Answer:
I don't have all the context but maybe something along the lines of..
Step-by-step explanation:
Try something more like "To Whom It May Concern" instead of "dear".
Like this..
To whom it may concern,
I am reaching out to you in regards to the inadequate housekeeping services offered by the service provider. Given my circumstances - working two shifts - the work it takes for me to clean my house on top of that is overbearing. Considering that I can't possibly be the only one under this predicament, I'm proposing that a more situation modified housekeeping service be offered for people in my situation. Please take this into your consideration. Thank you for your time.
Warmest Regards
Name.
Hope this helps :)