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Revise the following sentence so that it uses parallel structure. Use proper spelling and grammar.

I am talented at writing, sports, and I play music.

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Parallelism is when there is grammar equilibrium in two or more sentences, we can see such a case if we rewrite this sentence that has no correct parallel structure:

I am talented at writing, -no-ing verb-sports, and I play music.

The problem with this previous sentence is in the Bold letters, there is no grammar equilibrium.

A correct parallel structure i:

I am talented at writing, doing sports, and playing music.

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