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Frank has written a formal essay about the Beatles that he was assigned for his music class.

What would be a better way to write the following sentence to make the language more appropriate for the
assignment?
At that time, they were the coolest band on the planet.
A. All the other bands around were totally uncool compared to them.
B. This is the best sentence to use.
C. No one could touch them.
D. At the time, they were the most popular band in the music industry.

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Answer:

D.

Step-by-step explanation:

A, B and C contain words and expressions that may be deemed "Informal" such as "coolest" or "totally" and are thus inappropriate for a formal essay.

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