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Delete the irrelevant and redundant information to make a clearer sentence.

Delete the irrelevant and redundant information to make a clearer sentence.-example-1
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“At 9pm this evening, I have to meet with my group on a video call”. It’s unnecessary for the reader to know the time the narrator was born within this context.
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