Which one sounds better ? A long time ago there was a small, dark , and gloomy city in Kagoshima , Japan Or A long time ago there was a small,dark, and gloomy city of Kagoshima , Japan

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Which one sounds better ?

A long time ago there was a small, dark , and gloomy city in Kagoshima , Japan
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A long time ago there was a small,dark, and gloomy city of Kagoshima , Japan

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the first one. the second one doesn't flow as good

KlaasNotFound answered Mar 24, 2019

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A long time ago there was a small, dark , and gloomy city in Kagoshima , Japan

HTH ^^

Bryan Elliott answered Mar 28, 2019

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