Question

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She smiles in a way no one else could.
She laughs only when she wants to.
She talks like everything is fine.
Strange that's she's dead on the inside though.

Tell me what you think of my poem cause I love it.

Answer 1

It sounds great, in my opinion. I'm sure there are people out there that can relate in some sort of way to it, and I feel like that's one of the most important parts of it.