Question

Find and fix the fragments in the paragraph below.

The boat ride to the island took about two hours. Our boat held a lot of tourists. About thirty people. As we
were cruising. We could see dolphins in the water. They started playing with us. Coming very close to the boat.
Jumping, flipping, and splashing. We raced with the dolphins. Which was exciting. Even though we lost. We
reached the island's shore at sunset. Just in time for the luau. We saw a show at the Polynesian Cultural
Center. Dancing and singing in traditional Polynesian costumes. We tasted many local dishes. I loved all of the
foods. Especially the poi. Which is ground up taro root. When it was time to get back on the boat. I wanted to
stay. Because my first trip to Hawaii was so fun. (12 errors)

Answer 1

The boat ride to the island took about two hours. Our boat held a lot of tourists, about thirty people. As we were cruising, we could see dolphins in the water, they started playing with us. Coming very close to the boat jumping, flipping and splashing. We raced with the dolphins, which was exciting, even though we lost. We reached the island's shore at sunset, just in time for the luau. We saw a show at the Polynesian Cultural Center. Dancing and singing in traditional Polynesian costumes. We tasted many local dishes, I loved all of the foods, especially the poi, which is ground up taro root. When it was time to get back on the boat, I wanted to stay because my first trip to Hawaii was so fun.

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The boat ride to the island took about two hours. Our boat held a lot of tourists. About thirty people. As we were cruising. We could see dolphins in the water. They started playing with us. Coming very close to the boat. Jumping, flipping, and splashing. We raced with the dolphins. Which was exciting. Even though we lost. We reached the island's shore at sunset. Just in time for the luau. We saw a show at the Polynesian Cultural Center. Dancing and singing in traditional Polynesian costumes. We tasted many local dishes. I loved all of the foods. Especially the poi. Which is ground up taro root. When it was time to get back on the boat. I wanted to stay. Because my first trip to Hawaii was so fun.

Answer 2

The boat ride to the island took about two hours. Our boat held about thirty people.

As we were cruising we could see dolphins in the ocean. they started communicating with us, swimming very close to the boat.

Jumping, flipping, and splashing. We raced with the dolphins which was exciting, even though we lost.

We reached the island's shore at sunset just in time for the luau. We saw a show at the Polynesian Cultural

Center. Dancing and singing in traditional Polynesian costumes. we tasted many local dishes, I loved all of the

foods, especially the poi. Which is ground-up taro root. When it was time to get back on the boat, I wanted to

stay, Because my first trip to Hawaii was so fun.

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