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Whats wrong with this...Walt Disney studios is back with another delightful film sure to entertain children and adults alike, hat’s off to the writer and director of this charming little endeavor. They have effectively managed to breathe new life into an old classic: by giving Rapunzel's tale a fresh twist, instead of the meek and helpless Rapunzel of the original Disney story; this retelling gives us a spunky and assertive heroine ready to take command of her own life

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punctuation errors

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There should be a period after “alike” and before “hats off...” there shouldn’t be an apostrophe in “hats”. The colon after “classic” is unnecessary; remove it. There should be a period instead of a comma after “fresh twist”. There should be a comma instead of a semi-colon after “Disney story”.
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