Question

Refine and polish the thesis statement to make it more appropriate for a 5 paragraph essay.

1.living in a home is the best situation for a child

2.the city budget should be spent on limiting pollution

3.requiring that students wear uniforms is a bad idea

Answer 1

1. The ideal living situation for a child is living in a home.

2. Pollution negatively impacts both humans and the environment, therefore the city budget should implement measures to limit pollution.

3. School uniforms are not beneficial to students, as they do not improve their cognitive growth.