Question

Can somone proofread my poem for english its supposed to be a 2 stanza free verse poem

Constantly worried about what others think of me

Dying at the certain thoughts of people that do not know me

Ive searched for love in the wrong places

Now I'm dealing with crippling anxiety


anxiety During my teen years

Ive cared about people far too much

For I am an empath

Now I feel like I lost part of myself

In people that did not feel the same


Drowning in my worries

Waiting for someone to save me

For who will save me

When i have a child to raise

Answer 1

Answer: a poem i was in a garden i felt like i was flying so i looks down and i was in space and figured out that i can fly like a superhero to day i am one and all that hard work to become one made it seem really hard to become one after all these years i been waiting for this my whole life and it get here on time it was so existing to beablle to fly like a superhero i loved that day in till then you never see me woooo hooo loved that day till then

Step-by-step explanation:

just think of how a riddle would sound hope this helps:]

Answer 2

Yours is great but I just tweaked it a little for extra emphasis

Dying at the certain thoughts of individuals that don't know me

Ive probe for love within the wrong places

Now I'm handling crippling anxiety anxiety

During my teen years

Ive cared about people far an excessive amount

For i'm an empath

Now I want I lose a part of myself

In folks that failed to feel the identical

Drowning in my worries

Waiting for someone to avoid saving me

For who will save me

When i have a toddler to lift