Question

THE STREAM of secrets:

As I was sitting by the stream Looking over it was clean that Day I just thought of my mom when I was chewing my favorite treat Had this guitar since I was 14 Now, I am turning 15 today but it was an enjoyable day Nothing going wrong with my horse I made my bed with no regret I destroyed a friend's guitar because he said my singing sucked but It was a fair day I got a new tractor Got down for and met my country friends once again out in the woods with no worries at all feeling like I had nothing to doooooo without you my friend had the good old days with you my old pal

Answer 1

It sounds good in my head but maybe add more of a story because the horse part sounds kinda random, but that's just my opinion

Answer 2

Sound good good luck