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can someone help me write my introduction paragraph better "Which was Brutus mostly for you was he a patriot or a betrayer ? In my opinion I think Brutus was a betrayer he did a lot of terrible things like murdering his true friend he thought it'll be good for Rome. It doesn't matter what stuff he did to be a patriot he murdered a person that's a betrayer especially a close friend Caesar trusted him a lot Brutus was always there for him but he betrayed him."

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Always be defensive in the beginning clause