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Shape

poem.
This is a
shape poem. It is
about a house. As a
shape poem. It forms the
shape of a house.
This is a little house.
So it would be a little
poem if it were a poem.
But it’s not because
A poem I’m not!




Add metaphor
Add similes and personification
I think you’re missing alliteration

User Marco Forberg
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23 votes
I think this poem is missing alliteration.
User James Ives
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