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Which is the best revision of this sentence? Staring at the sun, I hurt my eyes. A. Stared at the sun and hurt my eyes. B. I hurt my eyes by staring at the sun. C. I hurt my eyes by stares at the sun.
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Which is the best revision of this sentence?

Staring at the sun, I hurt my eyes.

A. Stared at the sun and hurt my eyes.
B. I hurt my eyes by staring at the sun.
C. I hurt my eyes by stares at the sun.
D. Hurting my eyes, I stared at the sun.

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The answer is B, I hurt my eyes by staring at the sun.
User Jaco Briers
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Hello.

The answer is I hurt my eyes by staring at the sun.

Thats the only senetence that sis also correct.

A and d is not proper grammar, and it cant be c becasue stares is not a verb but sraring is and its also doing something. Stares does not sound correct.

Have a nice day
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