Question

How should I make this sentence make more sense? I don’t know if I should fix the semicolon or if I should make it 2 separate sentences...

“By seeing all her actions and the way she thinks, I would say she is at stage 3; because although she doesn’t want to do all these things, she still wants approval from her parents.”

Answer 1

By seeing all her actions and the way she thinks, I would say she is at stage 3 because, although she doesn’t want to do all these things, she still wants approval from her parents.

Step-by-step explanation:

I took off the ; and added a coma after "because" so that "although she doesn't want to do all these things" is like it's in ().

You could also make this two sentences.

Hope this helps!