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What is wrong with this example? Hey, I really think I'd be amazing at the job and totally hope you hire me. Talk to you soon!
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What is wrong with this example?

Hey, I really think I'd be amazing at the job and totally hope you hire me. Talk to you soon!

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Answer: The sentences are too formal

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We can see the person writing this is trying to get a job. He/she uses inappropriate words and phrases for trying to get a job like "totally" and "hope you hire me"

I'm not sure how else to answer this, if this doesn't answer the question let me know how you'd like me to.
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