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Notice the repeated use of commonly used words in the paragraph below. Use a thesaurus to improve the maturity of the writing by replacing five words in bold. Rewrite the paragraphs. Use proper spelling and grammar.

Last summer I read a book that I really liked. It was the first time I have ever liked a book that much. The book was about a man who had been shipwrecked on a deserted island. It was a good story, and I would recommend it to anyone who likes a good story.

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Hello my friend!
here is the answer to your question


Last summer i read a book that i really prized. It was the first time i have ever admired a book that much. The book was about a man who had been shipwrecked on a deserted island. It was a wonderful story,and i would recommend it to anyone who loves a marvelous story.

Hope this helps! good luck!

Spoopy~
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Last summer I read a book that I really admired. It was the first time I have ever cherished a book that much. The book was about a man who had been shipwrecked on a deserted island. It was a marvelous story, and I would recommend it to anyone who appreciate a satisfying story.

Hope this helped!

Nate

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