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Traci was asked to write a short piece about volcanic activity in Hawaii for a local elementary school science fair. After seeing the article, her town's Science Committee asked her to adapt her article, and rewrite it for their magazine, read by the community scientists. How might Traci adapt her tone for the two different articles? Why?

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she should have a more serious and formal tone when writing the article for the magazine. In elementary school, many children don't understand certian forms of speach and have small attention spans. The scientists, however, respond differently to a more serious and complex tone.

did this for odessy. got 100

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