Question

I need someone to fix my grammar and highlight any punctuation or mechanics errors.

Answer 1

I am going to choose letter D. I picked English class because I really need to learn English and allow my parents to learn from me. If I am going to transfer from Washtenaw College, I would like to go to The University of Michigan, because I really wish to go to that University, but unfortunately the payment is expensive for me. I wish to study as a pharmacist or at least in a laboratory. You may be asking why I chose laboratory as an option? That's due to how my mom's majors are in that category. My whole family supports me to go to either one as mentioned before, but I choose to be a pharmacist because I have a dream to put on the white coat and prove to my parents that I am strong and well accomplished. I have an auntie that is also a pharmacist, and my other auntie is working as a dentist, I also have a cousin that is a lawyer and another cousin that is a nurse, I would also like to mention that my sister does Radiation therapy, these are what my inspirations of being a pharmacist come from and I am happy and thrilled about that and including the fact that my family is proud of me

i hope this helped!! I rephrased some words by the way :)

Answer 2

I think, The words in the brackets should be added or corrected.

Step-by-step explanation:

I am going to choose letter D. So, I pick (an) English class because I really need to learn English and let my parents learn from me. And if I am going to transfer from Washtenaw College(,) I would like to go to University of Michigan because I really wish to go there, but still the payment is too expensive for me, and I really wish to be studying there (a) pharmacist or at (least) laboratory, so why I pick (a) laboratory?

Because my (mom's) majors are laboratory, all my family support me go to pharmacist, laboratory, or

dentist but I pick pharmacist. And I really like to be (a) pharmacist to be the White Coat Because my dream is to wear it and show my parents that I am strong, and I (did) it. I have (an) auntie(;) she is a pharmacist and the other auntie dental and, I (have) got my cousin One of them is (a) lawyer and the other is Nurse and I have a sister she is Radiation therapy. That is why I picked (a) pharmacist. And I am happy with that and my family (is) proud of me.