Question

Revise your thesis if ____.

A . you do not think your statement will grab attention
B. it does not directly pertain to the gathered notes
C. a reviewer does not think it is engaging
D. your gathered notes are supported by the thesis

Answer 1

Your answer is b. Good luck.

Answer 2

B. it does not directly pertain to the gathered notes

Step-by-step explanation:

If your statement is engaging or attention grabbing might be up to debate, but a thesis will not make any sense if it's not supported by the rest of the text and the support usually comes from the notes that you gathered about the subject. If those are not connected to the thesis, there's clearly something wrong.