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The driving test examiner told me to turn right and park, and then I almost hit a tree, and then he screamed. Which revision corrects the faulty coordination in the sentence?

The driving test examiner told me to turn right and park. When I almost hit a tree, he screamed.
The driving test examiner told me to turn right, then park, and then I almost hit a tree, and he screamed.
I turned right to park, and then I almost hit a tree, and then the driving test examiner screamed. 0 of 1

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I believe the answer is, The driving test examiner told me to turn right and park. When I almost hit a tree, he screamed. Hope this answer helps.
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