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“Our school should participate in the national ‘Shut Down Your Screen Week’ because of the following issues with technology.” Read the above sentence from Gil’s essay. What is the best way to revise this sentence? A. “Our school should participate in the national ‘Shut Down Your Screen Week,’ because of the following issues with technology.” B. “Our school should participate in the national ‘Shut Down Your Screen Week’ – because of the following issues with technology.” C. “Our school should participate in the national ‘Shut Down Your Screen Week;’ because of the following issues with technology.” D. “Because of issues with technology, our school should participate in the national ‘Shut Down Your Screen Week.’”

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Use B to revise the sentence in his Essay
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