Question

HELP!!! CAN ANYONE HELP ME FINISH THIS PROMOTION SPEECH???

Hello everyone! It’s awesome to be here today. We are finally finished with 6th grade! First off, I would like to thank to all our family, friends, and teachers for coming to our 6th grade promotion ceremony.

Of what lies before us are our futures as they await for us in our new middle school classrooms. Behind us are the past who wave goodbye and remind us of the wonderful memories we all had from the day we were born to this very day.

I would like to thank all families for caring and supporting us to this day. I appreciate what you had done to me. It means so much! Thank you to friends who encourage me and help me when I have a difficult time. I also would like to thank teachers who have helped us get here today.

I remember that embarrassed and nervous feeling when I first started Kindergarten. I screamed as loud as narwhals and everyone stared at me. Kindergarten was a nice experience to get use to school and it was a fun time. Here we are six years later,

Answer 1

I'm graduating and going to seventh grade. I'm proud of myself and everyone else that has supported me with this long journey. I am excited to learn even more next year and again big thanks to anyone that has helped me, friends, family, and teachers. 

Answer 2

This is a really good speech! Just try not to say "to this very day" and "today" so often.