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Which revision is needed to correct the following sentence?

Douglas could see, that no one believed him so he picked up his coat and left.

A. Move the comma to after the word that.
B. Add a comma after the word coat.
C. Add a comma after the word so.
D. Move the comma to after the word him.

User Raceyman
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You add a comma after the word him. i hope its right.. sorry if i’m wrong :(
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