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What is the best way to correct the parallelism in this sentence? She had a lovely house, many friends, and her body of work was impressive

A. She had a lovely house, many friends, and a body of work, which was impressive.
B. Her house was lovely, and she had many friends and an impressive body of work.
C. She had a lovely house, where she entertained many friends and where her
impressive body of work was created.
D. She had a lovely house, many friends, and an impressive body of work.

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I’m pretty sure the answer is B, but I would say you should also google parallelism examples online before you answer!
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