Question

Practice creating a dramatic scene. Create three to five sentences that paint an image in the reader’s mind. In each sentence include at least one of the following: simile, metaphor, alliteration, personification, onomatopoeia, hyperbole, and connotation. Label each sentence with the device you used. (Note: You will not necessarily use all of these devices.)

Answer 1

Hooves like thunder, the big, beautiful, bold, black, Bavarian horse bounded into blue lagoon beach. As the trees started to dance with the wind, The sun hid as the grey clouds cried drops of rain as the big horse ran for shelter.

Step-by-step explanation:

First sentence: Similes, Alliteration. Second Personification

Hope it helped!

Answer 2

Try describing simple like the sky.

#1 The clouds float across the sky like fluffy bits of cotton candy.
#2 The sun smiles down on the earth, yellow and bright.
#3 Whispering wisps of wind whistle by.

This uses simile, personification, and alliteration in that order. For your own (if you don't want to plagiarize my answer entirely) try replacing the verbs and adjectives I used for each sentence, and maybe find your own comparison for the clouds. I wouldn't suggest using my response word for word, but it can be a good example. Plus, mine isn't very dramatic.

Maybe describe a stormy sky?