Question

Read the passage. (1) Are your kids having trouble passing their classes? 2) Get them the help they need. (3) Call Tutorific, it’s the best tutoring service in town. (4) All our tutors are experienced teachers certified to teach in their subject areas. (5) Our tutors also undergo extensive training in teaching methods. (6) Experience and training make Tutorific’s tutors the most effective in the city. (7) In fact, a recent survey shows that after 20 hours of study with a Tutorific tutor, students improved their test scores an average of 40 percent. Which revision does the passage need? rewriting to correct the run-on in sentence 3 cutting the statistic in sentence 7 elaborating on why Tutorific tutors are effective adding a clear statement of purpose

Answer 1

i believe it c because of the sentence is setup

Answer 2

The correct answer is C. A clear statement of purpose is one that explains customers, in this case, why their best option is to choose the service. Given the structure of this passage, a statement of purpose would be more effective than the mention of the statistics, since the passage is clearly intended for the general public, and numbers may not be as effective as explanations