Question

A student is writing a narrative about the time her parents told her she was going to have a baby brother. The student wants to use dialogue to convey her initial unease at the news. Which two sentences best accomplish this task?

Answer 1

The two sentences that can best describe the feeling are as follows :

1. The initial announcement was very shocking for me like ground slipped under my feet..

2. At the initial second, my first thought was that i might loose attention and affection from my parents and would end up as second priority for them.