Question

HONEST QUESTION!!! DO YOU LIKE MY POEM????

when you're admired and you don't notice, it's just not fair

the way you're loved but you're just unaware

you want their smile, the way they talk, and their tamed hair

you only wish you had someone brave enough to care

it can't be that easy because it's taken centuries

so you become not friends, not enemies, just strangers with some memories

Answer 1

Both versions are really good. it shows emotions in a discrete way. I really like them.

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Answer 2

i like it

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