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Read the following email, which Jim sent to his team. Then choose the answer below that best explains what is wrong with the email.SUBJECT: Proposal draft due FridayJust a reminder that the proposal draft is due Friday for all team's. Please finalize your work ahead of the deadline before Friday.

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The subject of the email is too long and contains all the information. The subject should have been: Proposal draft due on Friday. Rest of the information should have been included in the body of the email.

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