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Is this a good thesis statement?

The United States needs to take a stronger stance against all immigrants that infiltrate the United States in an illegal manner?

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Answer:

Yes, it is.

Step-by-step explanation:

You used correct grammar, correct punctuation, and it was overall really good. You may want to add on just a little bit.

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