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Too many pronouns can make a sentence unclear. Which editing process corrects such an issue?

Too many pronouns can make a sentence unclear. Which editing process corrects such-example-1
User Milag
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Answer:

B) Change "them" to "some analysts"

Step-by-step explanation:

It's the only alternative that shows more cleary who "they" are. The other ones make things even more confusing

User Swaechter
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Answer:

Option B is the correct answer.

Step-by-step explanation:

A pronoun is word that can stand itself as a noun phrase and it can refer to a subject or an object. There are many categories, which include subject pronouns, indefinite pronouns, and object pronouns. In this case, option B refers to an object pronoun, which is them. By changing it to some analysts the references would become clearer and easy to understand.

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