Answer:
In line one, when it says in, it is capitalized, make that a lower case.
In line 2, after it says Mark said, add a quotation and capitalize first, after that put a quotation at the end as well.
In line 3, do the same, add a quotation after mom said. Also make the aunt in this line lower case.
Same in line 4, at the start put quotation and put quotation after my mom said. (only put quotation on Go out and have fun, and Mikes friends are friendly try to make friend with them.)
In line 5 put quotation from the start until it says said Veronica.
Line 6, put a quotation from the start until you reach cried Molly, and start another quotation after that.
Line 7, put a comma after that morning.
Step-by-step explanation:
These are all I could do, there might be more that I haven't saw.