Question

How do I rewrite this: There is a long hallway. Ben walks down it. He sees a series of doors. None of the doors has a sign on it. He doesn't know which door to choose. He tries the first one. It just leads to an empty room. He hears a noise. He looks over his shoulder. Nobody is there.

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Ben walks down a long hallway. He sees a series of doors, but none of the doors has a sign on it. He doesn't know which door to choose. He tries the first one, but it's just an empty room. He hears a noise behind him so he looks over his shoulder only to see no one there.

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