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Kristin completed her introduction to her literary analysis of syntax and diction in Ernest Hemingway's short story "The Old Man and the Sea." Read her introduction. Then answer the question that follows.

[1]According to the Rolling Stones, "You can't always get what you want." [2]Life is full of disappointments, some of which feel as though they are too much to bear. [3]Literature often reflects this truth and teaches us that sometimes there is a triumph in the struggle, even if it is unsuccessful. [4]In this essay, I will explain how Hemingway makes effective use of short syntax and monotonous diction to evoke a mood of empathy in The Old Man and the Sea.

Which sentence in Kristin's essay should be revised for errors in formal tone and academic language?

A) 1
B) 2
C) 3
D) 4

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Answer: 4

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In this essay, I will explain how Hemingway makes effective use of short syntax, and monotonous diction to evoke a mood of empathy in The Old Man and the Sea.

you needed to add a comma between syntax and the word and because it's listing multiple things

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