Step-by-step explanation:
In this question, I can see that the paragraph or an excerpt is missing. I could not find the conclusion from your question but I will tell you some helpful information for it.
- Revision for the conclusion in considering a change of the end of the story and it can be changed in many ways. Revision is considering correction or rectification of something and in this case conclusion.
- Conclusion in considered as the end of something, usually event, text, process, the end of the story, excerpt, essay and more. Since the conclusion is considering the finish, it should have framed idea of a whole event or process.