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Rodney wants to revise a sentence to create a sense of danger.Which revision uses precise language to achieve the desired effect?

A. The boy carefully climbed down the rocky cliff to retrieve his hat.
B. The boy skidded down the rocky cliff to retrieve his hat.
C. The boy tumbled down the rocky cliff while trying to retrieve his hat.
D. The boy scrambled down the rocky cliff while trying to retrieve his hat.

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Answer:

A. The boy carefully climbed down the rocky cliff to retrieve his hat.

Step-by-step explanation:

The word carefully is a word that means with care or to be cautious meaning there could be potential danger. So this sentence best creates a sense of danger

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Answer: A

Explanation: just took it on Plato