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Explain how the writer of the High-Score essay more effectively introduced the topic

and controlling idea as compared to the writer of the Mid-Score essay.

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Step-by-step explanation:

User Scymex
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The writer did it by using more information in the topic rather than leaving it out in the body of the essay.
User Bertina
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