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i have an essay that has to be about Komodo Dragons. Komodo Dragons kill goats in the village because people over hunt deer. Can somebody help me make an introductory sentence with a thesis and a hooking topic sentence?

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For the hook do something like did you that Komodo Dragons don’t eat bugs like fellow reptiles but, goats? Then for the thesis explain briefly what you are going to write about.
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Answer: For starters, start off with "Did you know that dragons do exist? These “dragons” are actually called Komodo Dragons and they can grow 10 feet in size!" Then tell that they're endangering villagers and villages near them and give some examples of how such as roaming around classrooms and the effects of that and that should make you pretty good.

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