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For English I had to write a short paragraph about a strong emotion or feeling. The feeling I chose was having a crush/falling for someone. Please read my writing and if you could give me any tips, suggestions, or comments about how to make it better or your opinion on it that would be amazing. Thank you.

I want to be able to tell him that his eyes are the prettiest I have ever seen, that it’s the cutest thing when his eyes squint when he smiles his goofy smile, that it’s so adorable when he gets happy and excited about talking or doing the things he is interested in, and that he is perfect. And maybe one day in a few days, a few months, a few years, or in a different universe I will get to tell him all of these things, but for now, I will keep them to myself, and let myself sink into my dreams of what could be.

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well I believe if you feel that strongly about someone you should take a leap of faith and tell them exactly what's in your heart because we are never promised tomorrow and nobody should have feelings of regrets or sorrow or even a question of why not

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Answer: you did great it's amazing and beautiful you don't need to change anything because when I read this I feel everything is beautiful I love it !!

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