Question

Which revision most improves the sentence by adding description?

I like to work at the community garden because it has a multitude of things growing there.
Sometimes I work at the community garden since it is nearby and beneficial to everyone in the community.
There are plenty of vegetables, flowers, and plants at the community garden where I work.
The mixed aroma of spicy garlic and sweet roses tickles my nose when I work at the community garden.

Answer 1

d

Step-by-step explanation:

just got it right

Answer 2

Option: The mixed aroma of spicy garlic and sweet roses tickles my nose when I work at the community garden.

Step-by-step explanation:

The description is made powerful by using specific descriptory words. These are words that tell the reader how a substance feels, tastes, smells, or sounds. Let's look at the two example:

Simple: The man walked towards the gate.

More precise: The tall, dark, muscular man sauntered towards the green iron gate.

The words in bold describe how the man was, how he walked, and what kind of the gate he walked to.