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Which would you not include in your first draft of a thematic essay?

A. A main supporting story

B. Suggested insights

C. Specific sensory details

D. A claim statement

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Answer:

D. A Claim statement

Step-by-step explanation:

I just took the quiz and it was correct. Also, a claim statement belongs in a persuasive essay.

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Answer:

C. Specific sensory details

Step-by-step explanation:

It would be more appropriate for specific sensory details, if necessary in an essay, to be added only at the draft revision stage, as it would be easier for the author to perceive the need for these details and in which part of the essay they would fit better. The draft, however, serves for the entire structure of the essay to be established, as a raw material, which will be polished and modified in the abstract.

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