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ANSWER ASAP: So, I am writing a compare and contrast essay on least and most favorite subjects and my teacher said "This is a sloppy copy please make improvements" but Idk what "Improvements" to make clearly this teacher is an idiot I tried my best so, I need someone to help me look at my essay and rewrite it for me ASAP please? I will give brain and 50 points NOTICE: IF YOU TYPE RANDOM ANSWER JUST TO GET POINTS YOU ARE REPORTED AND YOUR ANSWER WILL GET REMOVED I ALREADY HAD TO ASK THE SAME QUESTION 5 TIMES)

ANSWER ASAP: So, I am writing a compare and contrast essay on least and most favorite-example-1
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My favorite subject is Math. I say this because it always has a specific pattern to follow, once you know it; it’s super simple, and it has alwasy been very interesting to me.

I state my first reason about patterns because when you learn them, the patterns never change. All you have to do is memorize them and then everything else comes easy.

I say my second reason; it’s simple because as you can tell, it relates to my first reason. Once you get it, you get it. It become simple, like when you finish the edges of a puzzle, it’s hard at first but once those edges are done, the middle is so much easier to finish. It’s like that for math, say getting down the steps 1, 2, 2 and then everything else starts clicking together.

Lastly, I say it has always been interesting to me because ever since I was young I noticed that everything worked together in unison. It is also used in our everyday life so I want to understand it because everything is connected to math, it’s what our world is built off of.

In conclusion, I say my favorite subject is math because it has a pattern, It’s simple, and it’s used in everyday life.

Whereas social studies is a different topic. This is my least favorite subject because I find it difficult, i think it’s boring, and It’s not used in my everyday life.

I find it difficult because I am required to write long essays about social studies. When I read from the textbook, I find that my mind ventures else-where and I can’t seem to pay attention as well.

I think that it’s burning because I am a more of a hands-on type of person and social studies just makes me read and then write about it. It’s hard for me to process things when I’m not able to do it myself. For example in math I’m the one to solve the problems.

I understand that we learn from people making mistakes in our past, but I rarely use this information in my everyday life like I have to with math.

In conclusion, social studies is my least favorite subject because It’s difficult, I find it boring, and I rarely use it in my everyday life.

I hope this helps, and let me know if you need me to combine them. :)

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the only thing i would change is to not talk about yourself as much a little isn't bad but try to leave out so much personal information ;) good luck because i like it

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