Question

Rewrite the following passage; combine thoughts to produce compound sentences and show logical relationships by

subordinating less important clauses to more important ones. Use proper conjunctions, and use verbals or phrases
wherever needed.
The sky was growing gray. The clouds were darkening. The sun was low. It was tinged with red. A biting
wind blew. It was from the north. The tree branches whispered. The birds did not sing. They had gone to
sleep. I was lonely. I thought about a warm walk last spring.

Answer 1

As I walked through the park, the sky began to grow gray. The clouds were darkening and the sun was low and tinged with red. Meanwhile, a biting wind from the north blew, making the branches of the trees whisper. The birds had most likely gone to sleep, and they did not sing. I was lonely, and this led me to think about a warm walk I took last spring.