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1-world was young , long river wandered
2-the river offered
3-the water retreated
4-the river hurried
5-mud was grabbing
the second part about writing is pretty self explanatory but if it were me i would write something like
1-a tall man made of water walked aimlessly through a forrest of trees.
2-a woman made of water fed the children of the land her water when they asked.
3-the water didn’t like to be drank so the more the moose drank, the more it tried to run away.
4-the river rushed and ran into holes in the ground that seemed to be waiting to be filled with water.
5-the mud was so thick and sticky that it clung to the moose’s feet.